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« Reply #15 on: November 01, 2010, 01:35:47 pm » |
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The deadline for Special Pokemon has now been lengthened! The presence of these haunting beings is hard to lift - they're here until 05/11/2010, people!
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Biography Umbreon Nickname: Tails Gender: Female; Personality: Timid Ability: ~Synchronize~, Holding: Oran Berry Happiness: 250, Level: 14; Experience: 12.5/14 Tackle Tail Whip Shadow Ball Sand Attack | Nidoran♂ Nickname: Toxin Gender: Male, Personality: Timid Ability: ~Poison Point~, ~Rivalry~ Holding: Rawst Berry Happiness: 210, Level: 15, Experience: 8/15 Double Kick Peck Focus Energy Poison Sting | Skorupi Nickname: N/A Gender: Male, Personality: Brave Ability: ~Battle Armour~, ~Sniper~, Holding: N/A Happiness: 80, Level: 5, Experience: 0/5 Bite Poison Sting --- ---
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« Reply #16 on: November 03, 2010, 02:05:30 am » |
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Actually, I did have a poem, but its over the word limit by about 50 words so... I didn't submit it out of fear of being disqualified.
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« Reply #17 on: November 03, 2010, 11:30:03 am » |
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Why didn't you shorten it, or create a new one? :3
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Biography Umbreon Nickname: Tails Gender: Female; Personality: Timid Ability: ~Synchronize~, Holding: Oran Berry Happiness: 250, Level: 14; Experience: 12.5/14 Tackle Tail Whip Shadow Ball Sand Attack | Nidoran♂ Nickname: Toxin Gender: Male, Personality: Timid Ability: ~Poison Point~, ~Rivalry~ Holding: Rawst Berry Happiness: 210, Level: 15, Experience: 8/15 Double Kick Peck Focus Energy Poison Sting | Skorupi Nickname: N/A Gender: Male, Personality: Brave Ability: ~Battle Armour~, ~Sniper~, Holding: N/A Happiness: 80, Level: 5, Experience: 0/5 Bite Poison Sting --- ---
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« Reply #18 on: November 05, 2010, 04:14:56 pm » |
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Thie competition failed.
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« Reply #19 on: November 05, 2010, 08:01:22 pm » |
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Why didn't you shorten it, or create a new one? :3
I liked what I had, and I couldn't see a way to shorten it without taking away from the actual poem.
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« Reply #20 on: November 07, 2010, 05:35:33 am » |
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Well, it's the end of the deadline, so... I'd like to hear it anyway. ^.^
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Biography Umbreon Nickname: Tails Gender: Female; Personality: Timid Ability: ~Synchronize~, Holding: Oran Berry Happiness: 250, Level: 14; Experience: 12.5/14 Tackle Tail Whip Shadow Ball Sand Attack | Nidoran♂ Nickname: Toxin Gender: Male, Personality: Timid Ability: ~Poison Point~, ~Rivalry~ Holding: Rawst Berry Happiness: 210, Level: 15, Experience: 8/15 Double Kick Peck Focus Energy Poison Sting | Skorupi Nickname: N/A Gender: Male, Personality: Brave Ability: ~Battle Armour~, ~Sniper~, Holding: N/A Happiness: 80, Level: 5, Experience: 0/5 Bite Poison Sting --- ---
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« Reply #21 on: November 10, 2010, 12:27:53 am » |
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Oh alright... but we warned. I fail so badly at poetry...
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Shadows crept around the house A cats eyes glittered in the darkness The wind howled as it rocked the trees This was the night of Hallows Eve The house lay in an old suburb of the town Shrouded with an aura of mystery The old people whispered: Don't go near that old house Those who enter never come out The young ones didn't listen They laughed in the old ones faces There is no such thing as a haunted house They laughed innocently And so, on the night of Hallows Eve The children entered the house With every step they took up that cracked path Their confidence slowly disappeared The house did look... Scary from this angle Had the trees really looked like some strange monster Arms ready to reach out and grab them? They were sure that the houses windows Had not been like shattered eyes, watching And what was that red substance covering the door? They could have sworn it had been painted Two of them stepped backwards Do we really want to enter this house? They asked the others, fear in their eyes Another agreed with them Maybe the old ones were right This place is frightful The leader of the group scoffed That's just an old wives tale He told them Made just to scare us The others shook their heads Turned and left Without everyone else with him Suddenly everything seemed a lot darker More mysterious and scary But he wasn't going back He was the bravest and was right About the old ones wanting to scare them He marched up to the door fearlessly And knocked on the tarnished door knocker The door opened by itself creaking as it did In the boy marched and the door closed behind him To this day, that boy has never been seen His disappearance just hammers in the tale That the old ones told everyone But strangely, on the night of Hallows Eve A voice whispers in the wind From the house itself Do not come here, lest you well meet my fate
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Extremely fail. 'specially the ending. It's... 346 words I think...
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